Wednesday's Words on a Friday

 

The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.

The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.

If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.

This month the words/prompts are supplied by Hilary Melton-Butcher and can be found here

This week's words/prompts are: 

1. banal 2. bows 3. canyon 4. dough 5. observant 

and/or: 

1. fulminating 2. beady 3. margarine 4. suit 5. brazen (guess which word I didn't use)

Also including Charlotte's colour of the month: signal green

Here is my story:

Cheryl, celebrating her seventieth birthday, kneaded yet another batch of dough in her quest to master the art of breadmaking. Her pet rat, Rudy, watched with his observant beady little eyes, hoping a crumb or two might be dropped into his cage. As she kneaded, Cheryl thought the banality of day-to-day retirement life had lost its charm. No longer content to while away her days with walks, attempts at baking and reading, she dreamed of travel.

It would be nice to get away. Far away, she thought. Some place where she would no longer accidentally run into her cheating ex-husband and that brazen hussy he had shacked up with. Seemed like everywhere she went these days, she encountered “Floozy Suzy” with those ridiculous little glitter bows in her fake golden curls and the too short flouncy skirts that didn’t suit her at all. Clearly the woman had no dress sense, or perhaps she thought they made her look young. Quite a stretch of the imagination, thought Cheryl, Floozy Suzy was definitely closer to sixty than fifty.

The oven timer dinged and she wiped her hands on her signal green apron, then a loaf of bread was pulled out to cool on the rack. It smelled and looked delicious, but so had previous loaves, hiding their grey doughiness under golden crust. Cheryl had decided her old packet of dried yeast was probably deader than the kings in their pyramids and had bought new just yesterday. Perhaps this batch of bread would be edible after all. She finished kneading and divided the dough into smaller pieces, these would be bread rolls. If the breadmaking Gods were feeling kindly this week.

Cheryl broke off a tiny bit from the cooling loaf and spread a minute amount of margarine on it before dropping it into Rudy’s cage. He quivered with excitement and picked it up with his tiny paws. “What do you think about King’s Canyon?” she asked him. “We saw it on that TV program last night and it looks nice. I might visit the Tourism Office later today and see if there are bus tours available. I can’t take you with me though, you’d have a lovely holiday with John and Maxine next door instead. Their kids love you.”

Comments

  1. A pet rat! How wonderful. They are such intelligent animals, but rats just would not have fitted in with what passes for our 'lifestyle'!

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  2. I really really hope that this batch of bread works. And that Cheryl gets that trip.

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  3. Elephant's Child; yes to both and I wish I was Cheryl. I'd like to travel a bit.

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  4. She deserves tog et away, I hope she does.

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  5. jabblog; they are intelligent but I could never have one. I'd be worried it might escape outside and be eaten.

    messymimi; she does get away and has a lovely holiday. I'd go too if I could.

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  6. I haven't made bread like that in a very long time but I remember getting yeast that didn't do its job. One year my dinner rolls could have seriously been used as ammo in a slingshot. Horrible. - As for the pet rat. My kids actually had one. His name was Budweiser and he was an albino with red eyes. He was tame and would sit on our shoulders, eat popcorn, or just hang out. We never had another one after him but he really was cool.

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  7. MMM; I remember trying to make bread last summer, the loaf that looked good wasn't and the loaf that looked terrible was almost edible, but the rest were definite failures. I finally thought to look at the date on the yeast and it was four years past the use by date. I haven't tried bread again though I did buy new yeast and make pizza bases with it.

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  8. Love the name Floozy Suzy...and a pet rat. Good story River.

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  9. I had a Jaculus-"mouse". When I was home (I was 13) she roamed free.
    She would´ve gotten herself a crumb here and there...
    Oh, my. My Brother says my ex comes to his shop once in a while. Eeek.
    I need breadmaking Gods!!!
    What a sweet... a bitter-sweet story!
    We have today off, Ingo and I, but school holidays are on so it is all super-expensive and full. We stay home.

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  10. Rudy is one lucky rat! Not only is he served bread WITH MARGARINE, but he gets to go on holiday, too, rather than sit at home in his cage alone. A visit with the neighbors will be more interesting to him than a trip to a canyon.

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  11. Margaret D; I don't know where Floozy Suzy came from, it just popped into my head and I love it :)

    Iris; I wouldn't like a mouse that ran free, the thought of mouse droppings everywhere is not good for me. Bad enough I have dust and cat hair everywhere now. School holidays will be here soon too, in July for two weeks.

    Val; Rudy is a lucky rat, loved and well cared for. The neighbours children are boys and they love Rudy very much and even take him in his cage to school sometimes.

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  12. River, that "mouse" knew where to go when she had to "go", there was never a mess. She was clever. And sadly very lonely often. What stories did she tell me, I never know but she made all the way up to my shoulder, stood up and talked into my human, naked, funny-looking ear. She knew it was an ear.

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  13. Fun story, a pet rat and unlucky baker ;) I like it and hope she will eventually suceed.

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