Wednesday's Words on a Friday
The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.
This month the words/prompts are supplied by Hilary Melton-Butcher and can be found here
This week's words/prompts are:
1. banal 2. bows 3. canyon 4. dough 5. observant
and/or:
1. fulminating 2. beady 3. margarine 4. suit 5. brazen (guess which word I didn't use)
Also including Charlotte's colour of the month: signal green
Here is my story:
Cheryl, celebrating her
seventieth birthday, kneaded yet another batch of dough in her quest to master
the art of breadmaking. Her pet rat, Rudy, watched with his observant beady
little eyes, hoping a crumb or two might be dropped into his cage. As she
kneaded, Cheryl thought the banality of day-to-day retirement life had lost its
charm. No longer content to while away her days with walks, attempts at baking
and reading, she dreamed of travel.
It would be nice to get
away. Far away, she thought. Some place where she would no longer accidentally
run into her cheating ex-husband and that brazen hussy he had shacked up with. Seemed
like everywhere she went these days, she encountered “Floozy Suzy” with those
ridiculous little glitter bows in her fake golden curls and the too short
flouncy skirts that didn’t suit her at all. Clearly the woman had no dress
sense, or perhaps she thought they made her look young. Quite a stretch of the
imagination, thought Cheryl, Floozy Suzy was definitely closer to sixty than
fifty.
The oven timer dinged
and she wiped her hands on her signal green apron, then a loaf of bread was
pulled out to cool on the rack. It smelled and looked delicious, but so had
previous loaves, hiding their grey doughiness under golden crust. Cheryl had
decided her old packet of dried yeast was probably deader than the kings in
their pyramids and had bought new just yesterday. Perhaps this batch of bread
would be edible after all. She finished kneading and divided the dough into
smaller pieces, these would be bread rolls. If the breadmaking Gods were feeling
kindly this week.
Cheryl broke off a tiny
bit from the cooling loaf and spread a minute amount of margarine on it before
dropping it into Rudy’s cage. He quivered with excitement and picked it up with
his tiny paws. “What do you think about King’s Canyon?” she asked him. “We saw
it on that TV program last night and it looks nice. I might visit the Tourism
Office later today and see if there are bus tours available. I can’t take you
with me though, you’d have a lovely holiday with John and Maxine next door instead. Their
kids love you.”
A pet rat! How wonderful. They are such intelligent animals, but rats just would not have fitted in with what passes for our 'lifestyle'!
ReplyDeleteI really really hope that this batch of bread works. And that Cheryl gets that trip.
ReplyDeleteElephant's Child; yes to both and I wish I was Cheryl. I'd like to travel a bit.
ReplyDeleteShe deserves tog et away, I hope she does.
ReplyDeletejabblog; they are intelligent but I could never have one. I'd be worried it might escape outside and be eaten.
ReplyDeletemessymimi; she does get away and has a lovely holiday. I'd go too if I could.
I haven't made bread like that in a very long time but I remember getting yeast that didn't do its job. One year my dinner rolls could have seriously been used as ammo in a slingshot. Horrible. - As for the pet rat. My kids actually had one. His name was Budweiser and he was an albino with red eyes. He was tame and would sit on our shoulders, eat popcorn, or just hang out. We never had another one after him but he really was cool.
ReplyDeleteMMM; I remember trying to make bread last summer, the loaf that looked good wasn't and the loaf that looked terrible was almost edible, but the rest were definite failures. I finally thought to look at the date on the yeast and it was four years past the use by date. I haven't tried bread again though I did buy new yeast and make pizza bases with it.
ReplyDeleteLove the name Floozy Suzy...and a pet rat. Good story River.
ReplyDeleteI had a Jaculus-"mouse". When I was home (I was 13) she roamed free.
ReplyDeleteShe would´ve gotten herself a crumb here and there...
Oh, my. My Brother says my ex comes to his shop once in a while. Eeek.
I need breadmaking Gods!!!
What a sweet... a bitter-sweet story!
We have today off, Ingo and I, but school holidays are on so it is all super-expensive and full. We stay home.
Rudy is one lucky rat! Not only is he served bread WITH MARGARINE, but he gets to go on holiday, too, rather than sit at home in his cage alone. A visit with the neighbors will be more interesting to him than a trip to a canyon.
ReplyDeleteMargaret D; I don't know where Floozy Suzy came from, it just popped into my head and I love it :)
ReplyDeleteIris; I wouldn't like a mouse that ran free, the thought of mouse droppings everywhere is not good for me. Bad enough I have dust and cat hair everywhere now. School holidays will be here soon too, in July for two weeks.
Val; Rudy is a lucky rat, loved and well cared for. The neighbours children are boys and they love Rudy very much and even take him in his cage to school sometimes.
River, that "mouse" knew where to go when she had to "go", there was never a mess. She was clever. And sadly very lonely often. What stories did she tell me, I never know but she made all the way up to my shoulder, stood up and talked into my human, naked, funny-looking ear. She knew it was an ear.
ReplyDeleteFun story, a pet rat and unlucky baker ;) I like it and hope she will eventually suceed.
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