Wednesday's Words on a Friday

 

The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.

The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.

If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.

This month the words/prompts are supplied by River (that's me) and can be found here

**Next month's prompts will be supplied by Messymimi**

This week's words/prompts are: 

1. instruction 

2. construction 

3. obstruction 

4. fuel 

5. compassion 

6. presentation 

and/or: 

1. depression 

2. craziness 

3. seemed 

4. house 

5. fountain 

6. chariot.

Here is my story:

Muddy water fountained out of the depressions left by the collapsed gazebo behind the house. The yard began to flood and the newly laid terrace seemed in danger of floating away. The site manager and the construction boss screamed at each other as muddy rivulets ran down their faces.

“How could this happen?” screamed Benny. “The instruction was very clear!”

“There was an underground obstruction where you wanted that west foundation,” said Roger. “We made a small deviation, but it should have been fine.”

“What obstruction?” yelled Benny.

“A watering or drainage system of some kind,” said Roger. “By the looks of things, there’s old pipes all over this damn plot and they’ve cracked wherever the heavier parts of machinery ran over them when delivering the parts for the gazebo.”

“So, what exactly went wrong?” said Benny.

“The water gathering underground from the leaking pipes made the soil too soggy to support the weight I guess. There has been a lot of rain lately,” said Roger.

“Who was the site inspector that passed the plan?” asked Roger. “Clearly he didn’t do his job properly.”

The craziness of the situation struck them both at once and they stood quietly, surveying the damage.

“Has the owner made any payments on the gazebo?” asked Benny. “I know he’s quite elderly and was planning to hold some kind of presentation party here once it was done.”

“Presentation party?” asked Roger.

“Yes, he was planning on handing the deeds to the property to his grandchildren, so they have a home instead of renting, he has already moved to a small retirement village with assisted living arrangements,” said Benny.

“So a little compassion on our part would be good along with a lot of apologizing,” said Roger. “I’ll go and fuel up The Chariot and go to the office and hunt up this site inspector.”

“I’ll go to the village and tell the owner and let him know we will be responsible for repairing the damage.”


Comments

  1. Great story - and how wonderful to read about a builder with integrity.

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    1. Elephant's Child; thank you. I know a few builders with integrity, but the inspector who passed the site is in for some trouble.

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    2. My son and I were lucky to have a really good home inspector before opting to move into the house where we currently live. I can't say too many good things about the plumbing company that we hired although at least they did a good enough job on the main stuff.

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    3. River you gave us some good prompts for March. You wrote a wonderful story with these, of course.

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    4. Ornery Owl; good home inspectors are worth paying for. Plumbers too.

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    5. Granny Annie; thank you. This last list was a bit of a challenge.

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  2. Am so happy the contractor will make it all good for the owner and his grandchildren. Kind of rare but welcome these days.

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    1. Arkansas Patti; thank you. I'm glad the contractor will do the right thing. It isn't the home owner's fault the site wasn't properly inspected.

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  4. The clear instruction to the construction workers was to create no obstruction outside the new fuel depot they were building. Compassion towards local residents was essential as the managing director Ms River made very clear.

    Soon depression set in amongst the workforce as they moaned amongst themselves about the craziness they had experienced under Ms River's leadership. She seemed to be living in a world of her own and hardly left her house with its Italian fountain in the driveway. There was even a replica Roman chariot on her lawn..... (To be continued after the ad-break).

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    1. Yorkshire Pudding; very funny :) An Italian fountain in the driveway?

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  5. Good story, and good for them, doing it right (once they knew how).

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    1. messymimi; there's going to be a lot of repair before they can rebuild the gazebo.

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  6. Sorry sorry about this had to happen.
    Coffee is on and stay safe

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    1. Dora; this is a fiction story, no real damage done.

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  7. Nice story, all through - that´s how life should be: Kindness, even in spite of such situations.

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    1. Iris Flavia; I wish kindness was part of the contract, too many just want to "get the job done" and get their money.

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    2. I am very happy I can report different stories of... your country!
      Once we had a hole in the tank - the mate who fixed it (in Mackay 1995) also replaced some other plastic parts, saying they would´ve broken soon - he did take but AUD$ 100! And we were sent there by a bigger garage who had no time for us, too.
      And once we didn´t "know" it was Saturday, we went to a garage and wondered why they party. They took care of our car anyways :-)

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  8. I used the prompt to create a Haibun to include in my forthcoming chapbook manuscript. I can't post the poem on my blog because it needs to be previously unpublished, but I gave you a shout-out in this post.
    https://poetryofthenetherworld.blogspot.com/2022/04/april-pad-challengenapowrimo-day-1.html

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  9. I've never joined a prompt but I find everyone's entries interesting. You're talented!

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    1. Lux G; thank you. Perhaps you could join sometime.

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  10. Sorry the video at my site didn't play for you. I hope its replacement will be working.

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    1. Susan Kane; I'll get back to it tomorrow.

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  11. The presentation of instruction about construction will fuel obstruction to compassion.

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