Wednesday's Words on a Friday
The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles.
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along and read it.
This week's words are actually two photographic images which I have included in my story::
As they left Jack’s office, Harry and Eleanor decided
that since they had the rest of the day on their hands, perhaps they’d have a look
at this “Shark Cove” place themselves. They asked directions from the desk
clerk who gave them a map and pointed out the turns to make along the main
roads. It didn’t look so far away, only four inches on the map, but that would
translate into at least an hour or two by car. Harry studied the map and declared
the place to be closer to their home than to the town they were currently in.
“It might be nice to wander around near the beach, it
will take our minds off that skeleton for a while.” “You’re right,” said
Eleanor, and off they went. They filled up with petrol before turning on to the
main highway and heading east. The flat road soon began threading through low
hills that became higher as they neared the coast. Rounding a bend, they spied
high cliffs over on their right, with a very small town almost directly below
them. Harry shifted to a lower gear to make the descent while saying “The other
entrance to the town looks less steep, see it over that way? Perhaps we should
go that way next time.” “I see it,” said Eleanor, “but this way is closer and
far prettier with the cliffs and that long pier stretching out into the cove. I
wonder why it is named Shark Cove? Do you suppose there are sharks in those
waters?”
“We’ll find out soon enough,” said Harry, as they
drove into the main street of the town. “Look at those lovely old-fashioned
street lights! There’s one with seagulls on it, see there?”
“Probably waiting for a family to come picnicking so
they can get lunch,” laughed Eleanor. “Look at the shimmer on that water, there
must be just enough breeze to make ripples all the way in to shore. Should we
stop at the General Store first? The desk clerk said the manager there knows
more about the place than anyone else.” “Good idea,” said Harry. “I thought
about asking at the hotel, but the General Store is also a Post Office he said,
and they’d be quite knowledgeable about the area. You could ask about Curly
Cuts and make an appointment, you did say Mum’s hair was nicely done and you
need a cut yourself.”
They parked the car, and strolled towards the General
Store. Looking around they noticed how quiet it was and wondered if it was
always so. “Maybe it gets busier in summer?” said Eleanor.
“We’ll ask,” said Harry as they entered the store. A
Post Office section was over to the right, with the manager serving a customer.
While waiting in line, Eleanor noticed an unusual picture on the wall. “Look at
that, Harry,” she said. “It looks like someone double exposed an image on one
of those old film type cameras. It looks good printed in grey tones like that.”
They soon found out Shark Cove had been named because
at very low tides the rocks ringing the beach looked like shark teeth when viewed
from the clifftop, but there were no real sharks in the area. “Is there a story
about that unusual photograph?” asked Eleanor. The manager, who introduced
himself as Bill Money, said it had been given to him by a photographer who’d
stayed in the Cove Hotel some years ago. “Her name was Cherie Kendall, she was
here with her husband Frank and young son, taking photos of the area. She used
to sell them to calendar and postcard manufacturers, but didn’t think this one
would sell. It wasn’t taken in this area anyway. I said I liked it, so she gave
it to me. Really sad what happened next. She was found murdered a couple of
days later, her husband and son haven’t been seen since. They were gone when
her body was found early one morning.”
“Oh, that’s horrible!” exclaimed Eleanor. “Was anyone
convicted?”
“No, said Bill. “The one person who might have seen
anything had a mental breakdown and now has a blank slate where her memory
should be. She’s the one who found Cherie, still lives around here, in the old
hospital, spends a lot of time with the old folks up at the “Scenic Retreat.”
“That’s the name on that old weather-beaten sign near
that causeway close to home,” said Harry. “I remember,” said Eleanor, “we said
we might take a look at it one day.”
there's a mystery here, maybe murder and mayhem? good take on the prompts.
ReplyDeletethanks for joining in, have a lovely day.
lissa; definitely a mystery, in fact several may eventually show themselves.
DeleteI am really glad to return to this story. And loved having a bit more of it. Thanks River (and lissa).
ReplyDeleteElephant's Child; ah, but which story?
DeleteI really like the link back to the Scenic Retreat story. And the neat way that both stories were combined.
DeleteThey are separate parts of the same story. Sssshh!
DeleteNext chapter, please!!
ReplyDeletefishducky; sorry, you're going to have to wait a whole week, just like everyone else. Including me.
DeleteThe plot thickens! Hope to read more of this at some point.
ReplyDeletejenny_o; I plan on keeping it going, but plans don't always work out. We'll have to wait and see.
DeleteOh this is developing beautifully. I love how you caught the atmosphere.
ReplyDeleteXO
WWW
Wisewebwoman; it is coming along nicely isn't it? Thank you.
DeleteI like how the town got its name. I was imagining snapping sharks jumping out of the water, like piranhas!
ReplyDeleteVal; I don't think a town would be built in a place where sharks acted like piranhas. As it is, shark Cove is a lovely quiet swimming area.
DeleteHow well you have used the image, River. Your built your story around them cleverly...incorporated them perfectly into your story.
ReplyDeleteWorthy of praise, indeed. :)
"images"...I meant to type. :)
DeleteLee; thank you, I worried about them a bit, then the words began to flow.
DeleteMore murder, i wonder if it is connected. They are certainly stirring things up.
ReplyDeletemessymimi; I could give hints, but that might spoil the story.
DeleteOh dear, a murder - nice story River..maybe the clue to the murder is in one of the photos.
ReplyDeleteMargaret-whiteangel; not just a murder, a second murder. These are the people who found a skeleton in their back yard.
DeleteMysteriouser and mysteriouser. Keep it coming.
ReplyDeleteUglemor; I'll do my best.
DeleteIntriguing! There must be a follow-up to this - we need to know what happened. I loved, 'only four inches on the map'- so true!
ReplyDeletejabblog; welcome back. There's definitely more coming, just need to work in next week's prompts.
DeleteOk---if I have to I'll wait the week:)) This could go several ways, will enjoy seeing which you chose.
ReplyDeleteArkansas Patti; a week isn't so long to wait.
DeleteYou are keeping me on the edge of my seat.
ReplyDeleteonly slightly confused; sit back and relax, there's six days until the next one.
DeleteAnd the plot thickens...
ReplyDeleteNice job! Weaving the prompts into an ongoing story takes a lot of skill... and imagination.
Susan; thank you. Sometimes it's hard, but I enjoy the challenge.
DeleteHi River,
ReplyDeleteShark Cove seems an eerie place. You are weaving quite the tale, River. I do know how much you like taking on this writing challenge. Your crafted words proves this.
Thank you.
Gary
Gary; thank you. Shark Cove is not at all eerie, but there are old mysteries there that need to be solved.
DeleteOh wow! I can't wait to continue on! Your writing is so intriguing... Thank you for stopping by my place and for your kind words. Congratulations on your Walter, also. :) I really do love this blogging circle. Happy Monday
ReplyDeleteMagical Mystical Mimi; thank you, I'm enjoying fitting the words into a story each week and if I can add extra chapters that's great.
DeleteYou left me hanging! I want to know more.
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