Wednesday's Words on a Friday
On Wednesday’s, Delores,
from Under The Porch Light, has a meme which she calls
“Words for Wednesday”.
She puts up a selection
of six words which we then use in a short story, or a poem.
I’m hopeless at poetry
so I always do a story.
It’s a fun challenge…why
not join in?
This week's words are:
1. indecent
2. vertical
3. deserted
4. spectacles
5. moon
6. fleeting
we also have a phrase...."a brittle cold that snapped the twigs of trees like old men's bones"
and a photo.
Here is my moment in time:
I stood on the bank of the deserted, dry riverbed cleaning smudges off my spectacles. My camera was ready, facing east, the tripod as vertical as possible, base firmly planted on a very large, almost completely flat rock.
Tonight the moon was to be full.
I had been offered an indecent amount of cash by my agent if I could photograph the moon in stages as it rose from the first glimmer of light to the full orb hanging fat and golden just above the horizon.
For a fleeting moment I thought of what I would do with all that money. Perhaps a new lambskin jacket I thought, as I shivered in the brittle cold.
I bent to check the focus of the camera. The sky was clear, indicating a heavy frost in the morning.
Nice job. I shivered with you.
ReplyDeleteThis is a beautiful double capture. Thank you so much.
ReplyDeleteA great slice of time. Enjoyed it thoroughly.
ReplyDeleteDelores; I'm shivering myself, but because the temperature here is dropping again. Seems summer can't make up her mind....
ReplyDeleteElephant's Child; thank you, I had to think a bit for this one.
Susan Kane; glad you liked it.
Anyone unable to leave comments here? apparently there is an issue for some, so email me your comment and I will copy paste it here.
Love it River!
ReplyDeleteAnd here I thought I might get a blast of sunshine to combat the brittle November cold up here :-)
ReplyDeleteYou painted a wonderful vignette. Now I'm dying to know more!
Love! I wanted more of the story. :)
ReplyDeleteA lovely moment in time! You're so good at capturing the moment, but I want to know what happened the NEXT moment... did the clouds roll in and ruin her opportunity? Naaaaah. I'm sure she's happily spending all that money.
ReplyDeleteallison tait; welcome! I don't think you've been here before, I know I haven't been to your site in yonks. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteMarie; sorry to make you shiver even more. I'm not sure there is more, not without a couple of years thinking....
Happy Elf mom; thank you. Sadly, that's all I wrote.
Susan; thank you. the NEXT moment is where I always get stuck, that's why I've taken the writing class, and it has been helpful, but I still can't move forward. I'll keep working at it, maybe not for this particular vignette.