Wednesday's Words on a Friday
The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles.
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along and read it.
This month the words are supplied by me and can be found right here.
1. pitiless
2. circumstance
3. coffee
4. black
5. shimmer
6. bottles
and/or:
1. reminded
2. sluice
3. blazing
4. fragment
5. routine
6. compartment
Here is my story:
The
pitiless glare Bruce levelled at Andrea had her cringing back into the corner
of the sofa. She managed to stammer, “I didn’t know he was in town. How could I
possibly have known?”
“So
you’d have me believe this is circumstance? You haven’t been communicating with
any of the old crowd at all?”
“No,”
Andrea whined. “Not even once. But I don’t think he noticed me, he was with
another officer, a woman who went into Curly Cuts as I was coming out. I turned
away the second I saw him, probably he didn’t even see me, but I was all
jittery by then and just had a few drinks to calm down.”
“A
few?” yelled Bruce. “You got back here all glassy-eyed and staggering. How you
managed the car I’ll never know!”
A
blazing argument erupted over who should have done what and how it wasn’t fair
for Bruce to expect her to suddenly be friends with people she’d been avoiding
for the last few years. “I never wanted to leave the city in the first place,”
she shouted. “This is all your fault anyway, this hare-brained scheme between
you and what’s his name! All over a bit of ground with a little Bed and
Breakfast shed on it!”
Bruce
barely controlled himself, stating “that bit of ground is sitting on top of a
seam of rare copper coloured granite. It’s worth billions if it can be mined
and I want my share!” He immediately regretted telling Andrea so much, she hadn’t
known about the granite, only that the land was worth quite a bit to a certain
developer who had paid Bruce a fat advance to get those Retreat people to sell
to him. He turned away, saying he would make a pot of coffee and suggested
Andrea wash the tear-stained make-up off her face.
“We’ll
talk more when you’ve settled down,” he said. “You can tell me if you learned anything
in that Hairdresser place. Right now I’m going to make us that pot of coffee.”
Walking into the kitchen, he glanced at several tiny bottles on the window
ledge, each holding a shimmering fragment of copper granite. They reminded him
of why they were here, and how everything seemed to be against him lately.
People turning up to stay at the Retreat, Detective Stanley Grace turning up
out of the blue and Stephanie…well, Stephanie presented a whole new slew of
problems now. Bruce’s mission had been to somehow get the owner to sell him The
Scenic Retreat and the land, then there could have been a convenient accident
with her and that Saunders couple. They were old, a nice kitchen fire or
something similar would have done the job.
Bruce
poured himself a cup of black coffee, then one for Andrea, adding plenty of
sugar to hers, just as she liked it, thankful the sweetness would hide the
taste of the sedative he also dropped in there. He hid the rest of the
sedatives in a secret compartment at the back of a drawer and carried the
coffees into the living room where Andrea sat slumped in a wing chair, staring
vacantly at the fireplace, her tired face now cleaned of make-up. He decided
any discussion could wait until tomorrow. His plans for a new routine for
Stephanie’s medications, he had to make sure her mind remained clouded even
through possible sleepovers at The Retreat. He wondered if he should mention
that Stephanie had begun to talk again and seemed to be remembering things.
Well done. I could never put together a story with required words. I was wondering how you might use sluice...don't blame you for not choosing that one.
ReplyDeletejoeh; thank you, this is just one more chapter of something I began years ago. I have something in mind for sluice and it will turn up when I need it.
DeleteCan't wait to see where this eventually ends up.
ReplyDeleteonly slightly confused; this has a long, long way to go. It's chapter 17 of the Lost and Found story I began a couple of years ago.
DeleteI would certainly like to know what this is all about...
ReplyDeleteGrace; if you have the time and inclination, all the lead-ups are scattered throughout the archives here. All on Fridays, but so is every other story...
DeleteOh, what a tangled web we weave! I'm pretty sure Bruce's plan will not turn out as...um...as he planned!
ReplyDeleteVal; Bruce's plan is quite devious, but things are happening that he hadn't counted on, so it will not end well for him.
DeleteOh my. I am glad that your words took us back to this story. And am anxiously waiting for more.
ReplyDeleteElephant's Child; I knew you would recognise the characters :)
DeleteI'm hoping to take it further, but there's a lot more thinking involved than I'm used to, so it will be slow going. I think it is already almost three years old.
I want more!!
ReplyDeletefishducky; me too! lots more, but it will take time.
DeleteBruce sure is a sneaky beast. I'm hoping for karma.
ReplyDeleteArkansas Patti; karma takes too long. Bruce will come undone a bit faster.
DeleteI hope Bruce picked up the wrong coffee by mistake! That'll teach him!!
ReplyDeleteYou're on a roll, River...well done. :)
I left a site for you to look at on your previous post....re Lola. I hope she's okay.
Lee; Bruce would never pick up the wrong coffee, but other things happen later on that see him get what he deserves. I'll check that site a bit later. Lola will be fine, she has an appointment for Tuesday morning, and is well otherwise.
DeleteBruce needs a comeuppance, and i hope he gets it.
ReplyDeletemessymimi; Bruce definitely needs something and there is something in the works, I just need to work out the details. Right after I map out the story.
Deleteoh my. I'm on the edge of my chair now! Here is mine: the lake
ReplyDeleteCindi; please don't fall off your chair :) I'll pop over and read yours in a minute.
DeleteNobody sees her black heart shimmer
ReplyDeleteBlazing away while the light grows dimmer
Pitiless are the fragments of what used to be
Stored in a compartment for none to see.
Nobody sees what can’t be done
Yet playing the game is always fun
Cries become laughter in just awhile
Cries turned happy are called a smile.
Reminded to quickly sluice her face
While the colorful bottles marched in place
Coffee mug music makes them sway and dance
No longer is this just routine circumstance.
Mildred Ratched; this is fabulous! and what a great way to use "sluice". I should have thought of that :( oh well.
DeleteCurly cuts is hair dress place.
ReplyDeleteCoffee is on
peppylady (Dora); yes, Curly Cuts is the hairdresser place in the small town where this story is set. But it is all fiction, even the town.
DeleteAh HA! A return to an old story! Well done. Good use of the words, and a good job keeping the story going. :)
ReplyDeleteSusan; thank you. I'm glad to be able to add a chapter, but it's turning out harder than I thought. I'm not sure it will ever get finished, I have to find a way to tie a few odd characters together. Bernice is a key there.
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