Wednesday's Words on a Friday
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along and read it.
This month the words are supplied by ME and can be found right here.
1.atonement
2. banishment
3. cavalier
4. wheeled
5. empirical
6. fondness
and/or:
1. gently
2. hats
3. irksome
4. janitorial
5. kindness
6. laughed
Here is my story:
God’s
Observation Deck 3
“Why so sad God?” said Peter. “You haven’t heard the
latest escapade?” replied God. “He’s gone too far this time, I’m going to have
to banish him.” “Lucifer? What’s he done now?” “Take a look,” said God. “He’s
been down there sowing seeds of hatred and jealousy again. Greed too. There’s
so much resentment and fighting amongst the people, no one has the time to
appreciate any of the good anymore.”
“I see,” said Peter. “Shall I send him to you?” “Yes,
please,” said God. He paced back and forth, frowning, as he tried to work out
the nicest possible way to banish his brother. When Lucifer arrived on the
deck, he immediately began screeching his discontent, showing just how well the
seeds of his own jealousy, hate and greed had grown within him.
As God began to speak, Lucifer screamed, “I’ll finish
you off first, you can’t do this to me!” and threw a giant fireball at his
brother. God halted the fireball with a single frosty look, causing it to
explode into millions of fiery gems which fell to the earth below, to be
discovered many centuries later in Australia, as opals.
Momentarily silenced, Lucifer had no choice but to
hear God’s words. “Your irksome behaviour, your cavalier attitude to our
janitorial position has gotten way out of hand, Lucy. Word has come from the
empirical being that you are to be banished, to live in a fiery hell of your
own making, since that is the way you seem to think things should be.”
A single bolt of lightning from far above the deck had
Lucifer cowering momentarily, then he straightened his spine and marched toward
the gap created in the heavenly mist.
“Fine! I’ll go, but this isn’t the end you know,” and
he stepped through, beginning his fall into the fiery depths of hell. “Let his
banishment be complete,” said God and the misty gap closed once more.
Peter stepped forward and gently guided God to his
favourite chair. A moment later Mary came through the gallery door with a
wheeled cart bearing cups of tea and many small cakes.
‘Well?” she said. “What do you think?” God glanced up
and, startled, almost fell off his chair. Mary preened as he said, “I see your
fondness for silly hats continues,” where did you get this one?” “Those
ostriches down in Africa dropped a few feathers and allowed me to take them.
The cupids-in-training stitched this up for me.”
“Hmmm,” said God. “Perhaps they should stick with
their training instead.” “Now, now,” laughed Mary. “Taking a break from all
those arrows and targets is a kindness they won’t forget. Everyone should have
more than one skill if it is at all possible.”
As God helped himself to more cakes, Mary asked, “is
there anyway Lucifer can achieve atonement?” ‘Not in my lifetime,” growled God,
biting into another chocolate covered petit-four. “It’s a good thing we’re in
heaven where there are no calories,” said Mary.
I absolutely LOVE this!
ReplyDeleteCindi Summerlin; thank you. I do too.
DeleteSo do I!!
ReplyDeletefishducky; thank you too.
DeleteSmiling broadly. No calories sounds a pretty good definition of heaven...
ReplyDeleteElephant's Child; no calories sounds perfectly like heaven to me.
DeleteSuch fun. You go get him God. Lucy needs handcuffed.
ReplyDeleteArkansas Patti; I think handcuffs might be a bit extreme.
DeleteClever, clever! There is a reason God is the One in Charge. I hope it is dark chocolate from Switzerland.
ReplyDeleteSusan Kane; in this one God isn't the one in charge. There is an Empirical Being who sent the word to God and the lightning bolt to open the portal to hell. Even God has a higher power...
DeleteAny good quality chocolate will do.
Well written and exciting to read.
ReplyDeleteGod bless.
Victor SE Moubarak; welcome to drifting and thank you.
DeleteSome things just can’t be atoned, can they. It would be nice if Lucifer were locked up.
ReplyDeletemessymimi; he is locked up. In hell. But now and again breaks loose or ends a few minions to do his dirty work.
DeleteHahahahahaha!
ReplyDeleteSharon; I knew you'd like it :)
DeleteInterest take on words
ReplyDeletepeppylady (Dora); thank you. I enjoy the challenge.
DeleteI know where Lucifer is! He's on Netflix!!!!
ReplyDeleteGood story, River. :)
Lee; is that why people with Netflix are having so much trouble lately? Thank you :)
DeleteCould be! I've been having trouble with Netflix for the last couple of days...but not with Foxtel Now or Stan!!
DeleteBrilliant! You always let your imagination run wild and have such fun with these heavenly posts. It shows... and makes them fun to read.
ReplyDeleteNo calories? Sign me up! Have a super weekend.
Susan; I like my God's Observation Deck series and have plenty of ideas for it.
DeleteNo calories would be heaven indeed.
Another good one. I like the tea and cakes details!
ReplyDeleteVal; thank you. I'm a fan of cakes myself, but prefer coffee over tea.
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