Wednesday's Words on a Friday
The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles.
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along and read it.
This month the words are supplied by ME! and can be found right here
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This week's words are: 1. yellow
2. zinnias
3. adjust
4. boots
5. chicken
6. doomed
and/or:
1. extensively
2. flagstones
3. gingerly
4. holding
5. investigator
6. jerked
Here is my story:
Barry Whitmore
watched carefully as his Granny gingerly negotiated the newly laid flagstones. “If
I’d known they were still a bit muddy, I’d have worn my rubber boots,” she
said. He reached out a hand. “No, no, don’t help me. I’m not decrepit just yet.
Getting on a bit, but I can still walk by myself, I just need to be slow and
careful. I see the flowerbeds have been planted, the seedlings look like
zinnias. Are they zinnias?” “Yes, Granny, yellow zinnias mostly, with a few
other colours randomly spaced. Mum thought you’d like them.”
Granny reached
the new front porch and slowly navigated the two broad steps leading up to it. “I
like it this way,” she said. “Raised up a bit means the rain won’t come
sweeping in under the front door anymore like it used to. What other work has been
done while I was away?” Barry said, “The whole house has been extensively
renovated. Mum wanted this and Dad wanted that and it just sort of snowballed.
They were both real pleased when the insurance investigator deemed the kitchen
fire an accident. Like it was, of course. Dad wouldn’t deliberately set the
kitchen alight. They paid up enough to get the whole house done over.”
“Ah yes,” said Granny.
“The fire. What was your dad cooking again? I don’t remember.” “That jerked
chicken recipe he found in a Jamaican cookbook. Probably should have done it on
the barbecue outside. But this way we got the kitchen Mum always wanted.” “She
deserves it too,” said Granny. “Your Mum is a fabulous cook. I can hardly wait
to taste one of her lemon chiffon cakes again.”
“Come and see
the new kitchen then,” said Barry. “And there’s something else, a secret, just
for you. If you want it that is.” After holding open the front door, Barry
showed his Granny the hallway floor, newly polished, on the way to the kitchen.
“I’ll show you the bedrooms after,” he said. “I want to show you the secret
surprise first.”
They reached the
kitchen and Granny gave a gasp of pure delight. “I love it,” she declared. “Look
at all the counter space! And the sunshine flooding in so Cathy won’t have to
have the electric light on all the time, like she used to.” Granny gave Barry a
hug. “Was it nice staying with Aunty Pat out in the country? Mum was a bit
worried about that, but she didn’t want you cramped up in that little caravan
they rented while the house got done,” said Barry.
“Aunty Pat was
nice, and those cousins too, so many cousins! but I had to adjust to the farm
routine again. It’s been a very long time since I got up at the crack of dawn.
These days I’m used to sleeping until seven o’clock. I’ll tell you one thing
though, if that rooster of theirs had crowed under my bedroom window just one
more time, he’d have been doomed. I might have chased him around the yard with
an axe. He would have been soup!”
Barry had a
good laugh at that mental image, his nearly ninety-year-old granny running
around with an axe. “Now what’s this about a secret surprise?” Granny said. “Over
here through this blue door,” said Barry flinging it open to reveal and entire
suite of rooms decorated in Granny’s favourite colours. “This is all for you,
if you want it. Mum and Dad would love to have you keep living with them. I’ll be
coming home in the holidays too and Susie said she’ll bring the new baby to
visit as soon as everyone is resettled.”
“I love it,”
said Granny. “I’ll have to thank Cathy and John for thinking of it. It’s
certainly a lot different now from the tiny cottage Seth and I moved into as
newlyweds.”
Awww - such a sweet story!
ReplyDeleteGrace; I tried to get some drama in there, but it just wasn't happening.
DeleteWhat a lovely story and what a feisty old granny.....I want to be just like her.
ReplyDeleteonly slightly confused; I want to be a feisty old granny too :)
DeleteComes a time when accepting help graciously is the wisest course. Well told!
ReplyDeletemessymimi; I hope I know when it's time to accept help.
DeleteThis is truly lovely. Thank you so much.
ReplyDeleteElephant's Child; thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
DeleteI loved this sweet story!!
ReplyDeletefishducky; thank you, I like it too. Of course now I want some lemon chiffon cake...
DeleteAww, gives one faith in taking care of family.
ReplyDeleteArkansas Patti; some families are like that and I'm glad of it.
DeleteThat's one lucky granny to have family who want her to live with them. Beats the heck out of a nursing home.
ReplyDeleteYet another terrific story. Good job!
Susan; for sure it beats the heck out of a nursing home. I'd be happy if my kids took care of me too.
DeleteThat's a great place for Granny! As long as they don't get a rooster, or at least hide the axe if they do.
ReplyDeleteVal; they don't live in the country, so there'll be no roosters and no axes either.
DeleteJerked chicken maybe sometime I will give it a try.
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Coffee is on
peppylady (Dora); I've made jerk sauce and jerk rub and given it to my sons for their barbecue days, but never tried it myself. There's too much chilli powder in it and I have allergies.
DeleteLinky things and me don't get along well, I always manage to stuff it up and if I did get it right, there might be far too many writers for me to read and comment on.
Prior to coming to Australia I was a insurance salesman and also had my own sideline Domestic fire extinguishers.
ReplyDeleteOne lady customer had a kitchen fire and used one of my little beauties to Quell the flames. Being a local Womans busybody type celeb, most of her twenty or so friends followed suit and bought my fire extinguishers , A handsome payday. never to be repeated. Great Story again.
Vest; it's nice you got to sell so many fire extinguishers. I wish we'd had one years ago when my drunk husband came home one night and decided he couldn't possibly go to sleep without eating homemade doughnuts first, so of course he fell asleep and set the kitchen on fire.
DeleteI'm running late, but better late than never, as the saying goes.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad I have finally made it...this is great, River. Love it! :)
Lee; late? I hadn't noticed. I'm a little preoccupied myself lately. I'm glad you liked it.
DeleteA wonderful wonderful wonderful story!
ReplyDeleteCindi Summerlin; thank you :)
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