Wednesday's Words on a Friday
The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.
This month the words/prompts are supplied by and Charlotte can be found here
This week's words/prompts are:
1. debt
2. impression
3. perception
4. grocery
5. lake
6. tale
and/or:
1. height
2. passion
3. security
4. movie
5. sample
6. wealth
Here is my story:
Betty Thompson and
Janet Hargrave sat sipping tea on the patio of the Lakeside Tearoom. Betty was
just bursting with news she wanted to tell, but sat politely as Janet went on
and on about a romance movie she had been watching, finishing with “just as the couple were
at the height of passion, our power went off! I didn’t get to see the rest of
the movie! I was so disappointed.” She gulped such a large mouthful of tea, she
almost choked trying to swallow it. “Shall we order another round of cakes
Betty? They are so delicious,” she said.
Betty said, “yes, go
ahead and order another pot of tea too please, then come back right away, I
have a tale to tell you.” Janet hurried off to order and was back soon enough,
bringing with her another of their friends who had popped in to see if anyone
was there to chat with. Carole sat herself in the spare chair and prepared for
a chummy gossip session. As soon as the tea and cakes arrived, Betty began. “You
all remember that new woman we saw at the school gates last winter?” “The one
in the fluffy coat that was at least ten years out of style? And those boots! No
one wears boots like that anymore! So unfashionable,” said Carole. “Yes, that’s
the one,” said Betty. “Her children all wear hand-me-down clothes as the oldest
grows out of them and she herself doesn’t wear make-up and never goes to the
hairdresser!”
“I know her,” said Janet,
“her name is Catherine and her husband is Jason, we had a chat at the school
gate right before the holidays.” “You didn’t tell me,” said Betty, feeling a
little indignant. “You had already left to come here,” said Janet, “but never
mind that now, what else do you need to tell us?” “Well,” said Betty, “I saw
her here! At the Lake Mall, shopping in the grocery store, just yesterday.
Given her clothing choices and lack of hair styling, I’d been under the
impression the family might be quite heavily in debt or were at least quite
poor, yet she had a cart simply overflowing with fresh fruit and groceries to
last a couple of weeks! I gave her a little wave as I passed her in aisle three
and she smiled back as if we were lifelong friends. It was most astonishing.”
“Let me tell you the
really astonishing part,” said Janet. “Put down your cups ladies, we don’t want
to be choking on this news.” Betty and Carole both put down their cups and
leaned in closer. “Do tell,” said Carole. “Your perception is wrong as usual,”
Janet said to Betty,” they are not at all poor. Her husband, Jason Barrymore,
is related to the movie star Barrymores, a cousin and quite close to them. Do
you see that brand new home across the lake with all the high grade security
features? It belongs to Catherine and Jason and they are arriving tomorrow to
spend the summer here. Right here at this very lake. They are our neighbours
now. What do you think of THAT?”
Betty and Carole were both
sitting open-mouthed, in shock at this news. “But…but…the shabby clothes, the
beat up old car…why would they get around like that?” stammered Betty. “They
don’t like to show off,” said Janet with a big grin. “They are really very
nice, down-to-earth people, who just happen to have more money than anyone else
we know.” Carole said, “ We, all of us, I mean, are reasonably well off, others
might call us rich and I guess they’d be right, but the kind of wealth the
Barrymores have is unheard of in these parts.” “You haven’t heard the best part
yet,” said Janet smugly as she sampled yet another of the tiny cream cakes. “She
has invited us to a barbecue lunch at that fabulous new lake house, next
Saturday. Children included.”
A very different take on the prompt. I do hope that people don't try and ingratiate themselves now that they realise the couple isn't poor...
ReplyDeleteElephant's Child; thank you. I hope so too, but maybe the word won't get 'out there' too soon and it is quite a small town. I also think Catherine and Jason are able to know "parasites" when they meet them.
DeleteWe have such a couple in our neighborhood. They have money, but the last thing they want to do is flaunt it.
ReplyDeletemessymimi; I know a few people like that. They aren't "Barrymore" rich, but they are well off, they just don't believe they need to show off.
DeleteQuite a turn in the story - and understandable, too. My Father´s Father died when Dad was just 14. He had to take over, worked very hard, became an optometrist, goldsmith, watch-maker and also helped with hearing aids (Hörgeräteakustiker is the German word).
ReplyDeleteLater in life he bought himself a Mercedes Cabrio. He never let the roof down unless being out of our little town cause he thought people might consider him being a rich as#...
Iris Flavia; your father did well and earned his Mercedes. My dad always wanted one, but wasted his money at the racecourse where he always seemed to be on the wrong horse.
DeleteI like people like these. Sensible despite their money.
ReplyDeleteCharlotte; I like sensible people too, I believe I would be too. I'm not the show off type.
DeleteThough River was heavily in debt, she liked to give the impression that everything was hunky dory. It was a perception that was certainly held in the local grocery store and at the posh cafe by the lake where she entertained her lady friends with a funny tale or two.
ReplyDeleteShe spoke of times when she reached the height of her youthful passion with a security guard called Eric who looked like a movie star. With such distractions, the waitress never extracted a sample of River's non-existent wealth for her chuckling friends always paid the bill.
Yorkshire Pudding; that's a very sneaky River. not at all like me. I'm poor, but not in debt in any way. I hate the idea of owing money.
DeleteSeems the Barrymore's spend their money on what is important, not the latest fashions which will soon become last years fashions. Kind of admire people like that.
ReplyDeleteI hope they accept the invitation, have a good time, and DON'T gossip about the BBQ afterwards!
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